~he took me to wander into dark night~
i thought…one more effort….
along the way he asked me
thou hast innocent eyes?
in silent walking… the rustle of my petticoats announcing
yes….innocents….
still…leading me to wander into a dark wood
despite all dangerous signs
along the way he asked me
thou hast hidden desires?
in silent i was
yes…hidden desires…
but the treacherous moon arises
suddenly….
catching me in surprise
a glimpse of me appears
bringing light to his blurry eyes….
astonishment and fright
in both hearts….
touching the blue vein with smooth fingers
a delight ~finishing my pain~
drowning an endless thirst
no time for answers still
my fangs, hands, body on him
Muscle stiffness ~deep breath~
…Oh!
let me finish with you quickly
thou need that and i too
~he took me to wander into dark night~
Hello poetheart. Another lovely write in the depths.
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Hello Poet…thanks so much… i love your comments. Kisses 🙂
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I forgot to say that is always an assurance that I’m on the right track…..your comments…Thanks so much…
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You are very welcome! You make your own track very well. My best wishes to you poetheart.
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Hi, Poetheart Alligator!! I don’t know about the “hasts” (obsolete), and why you would choose to use them. I suppose you wanted to “date” the doings here. But it was wondrous nonetheless!!
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yes…i wanted mark a time…ancient time…. Thanks Stan…..
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Mirna, this poem sustains a type of dynamic tension I have not seen in your earlier efforts. This is a very accomplished composition. Congratulations!-Misha Allport-Fortaleza, Brasil
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Hello Misha… dont take me to wonder in a dark night…. Thank you so much….Now i am thinking about this poem…. I dont remember the inspiration…. I think my silly imagination… Kisses my friend
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Reblogged this on "A Curious Mind".
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Here or there… I am a little dizzy ….. 🙂 🙂
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♥ 3 ♥”Mirna”♥ ❤ ♥
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Oopss!.. . ♥ ❤ ♥♥♥♥♥ Moochoo Smooches to you Mirna ♥♥♥♥♥ ❤ ♥.. . 😉
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Thank you Poet…. The first time i heard this word … Oh! Was sent by you…. What a fantastic word… I love English for that…. So so smooch… 🙂 🙂
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